דף הבית / דוגמא לעריכה לשונית באנגלית
כאשר מזמינים עריכה לשונית באנגלית, הדבר החשוב ביותר הוא שהעריכה תהיה יסודית ומקצועית ושהטקסט הערוך יהיה קולח, תקני, וחף מטעויות לשוניות. אולם לא תמיד אפשר לדעת מראש מהי הרמה של העורך הלשוני לפני שממש מבצעים את ההזמנה. בדיוק לשם כך אנחנו מציגים כאן דוגמא לעריכה לשונית לתקציר תזה באנגלית שביצענו (וקיבלנו רשות לפרסם), בה תוכלו לראות את השיפור הניכר בין המקור לטקסט שעבר עריכה, ואת המקצועיות של העבודה.
לפעמים יש ספק לגבי סוג העריכה הנחוץ, ועשויים לתהות האם עריכה לשונית מספיקה? במקרה כזה, טוב להסתכל על דוגמא לטקסט לפני ואחרי עריכה לשונית באנגלית, כדי להבין בדיוק מה השינויים המתבצעים בו. ניתן לראות שהתיקונים בעריכה לשונית באנגלית הם בתחומי הכתיב, הדקדוק, התחביר, והמשלב; ובסופו של דבר מתקבל טקסט בניסוח משופר.
Wild talk: close reading of social media posts about wild boars in the city of haifa
abstract
The city of Haifa is located on mount Carmel, some of its neighborhoods are on the top of the mountain and some on the hill sidse, while arround and within the urban spaces there are several areas which contain wild vegetation and wild life. One of the most common mammals among the Carmel wild life is the wild boar. Being a massive omnivor animal, and lacking a natural predetor, the wild boar population arround haifa has grown significantly throughout the last century. Simultaneously the city is growing and new neighborhods are built, decreasing whats left of the wild areas.
Folowong these trends, many wild boars have started to enter the urban parts of haifa, looking for food in dumpsters, in public parks and in privet gardens. The presence of wild boars in the city evokes many reactions, that are communicated on social networks. Some adore them and welcome them, some fear them and believe they should be chased out of the city’s line, some hold more complex opinion.
This papers purpose is to examine the deep meanings and layers of the people of haifa’s reactions to wild boars in the urban space. The method used in this study is close readings of 12 posts from facebook and from large local whatsapp groups. The types of posts analized were those who contain text – written or recorded. After the close readingsof the posts, a thematic analization of the content has been preformed, showing mutual themes such as militarism, xenophobia, demogarphic concerns, and teritory conflict.
The study shows that people who oppose the presence of wild boars in the city and consider them a threat, use terms that are more commonly used to describe human foes, namely – terms used by israel jews when reffering to palastinians.
Wild talk: Close reading of social media posts about wild boars in the city of Haifa
Abstract
The city of Haifa is located on Mount Carmel. Some of its neighborhoods are on the top of the mountain and some are on the hillside, and there are several areas that contain wild vegetation and wildlife. One of the most common mammals among Carmel wildlife is the wild boar. Being a massive omnivore, and lacking a natural predator, the wild boar population around Haifa has grown significantly throughout the last century. Simultaneously, the city grew and new neighborhoods were built, which decreased what was left of the wild areas.
Following these trends, many wild boars have started to enter the urban parts of Haifa, looking for food in dumpsters, public parks, and private gardens. The presence of wild boars in the city evokes many reactions, some of which are communicated on social networks. Some people adore them and welcome them, some fear them and believe they should be chased out of the city, and some hold more complex opinions.
This paper’s purpose is to examine the deep meanings and layers of the people of Haifa’s reactions to wild boars in the urban space. The method used in this study is the close reading of 12 posts from Facebook and from large local WhatsApp groups. The types of posts analyzed were those that contained text — written or recorded. After the close readings of the posts, a thematic analysis of the content was performed that showed mutual themes such as militarism, xenophobia, demographic concerns, and territory conflicts.
The study shows that people who oppose the presence of wild boars in the city and consider them to be a threat use terms that are more commonly used to describe human foes, namely — terms used by Israeli Jews when referring to Palestinians.
Wild talk: cClose reading of social media posts about wild boars in the city of hHaifa
aAbstract
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Some people adore them and welcome them, some fear them and believe they should be chased out of the city’s line, and some hold more complex opinions.
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The study shows that people who oppose the presence of wild boars in the city and consider them to be a threat, use terms that are more commonly used to describe human foes, namely –— terms used by iIsraeli jJews when refferingreferring to palastiniansPalestinians.
לאחר שעיינתם והתרשמתם מהדוגמא לעריכה לשונית באנגלית שלנו, אתם יכולים להזמין בנחת ובקלות עריכה לשונית. כל מה שצריך לעשות זה להעלות את קובץ הטקסט שדורש עריכה, ותוך מספר רגעים יופיע סכום לתשלום ותאריך סיום בו תוכלו לקבל את התוצר.
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